This is a short article about what I've learned when making the short film Shadows of the Past. And NO, it's not an article about visual effects. Of course, I've learned a lot of things (from camera work and directing to heavy compositing and using 3d packages) and I have probably done a fairly good job when it comes to the look of the film. But still I have a very bad feeling about the project as a whole - because I personally think I failed as a filmmaker. That's why I write this post: to remind myself what went wrong and why.
SotP was of course never meant to be a story-driven film, I planned it as a duel and added the storyline
after it was shot (and the story itself went through several transformations during that process). I felt fine about the way everything was heading right until a certain point in postproduction: when the effects were done and I had the final edit exported. It was then when I started to wonder...is this really what I wanted to create? A
visual effects driven story?
Don't get me wrong, I love visual effects and I love the way they expand the movie experience but - that's the thing. Because of the SotP I realized something that I had almost completely forgotten during the last few years. The eye-candy is meant to
supplement the story and not the other way around. This is of course no groundbreaking discovery...but it seems to me that today, more and more people tend to deliberately put this fact aside.
Not the explosions but the
emotions behind them are important. It is not the technological marvel but the story
idea that makes a groundbreaking film. Of course, hot chicks and stunning effects attract the masses and earn a lot of money but we shouldn't forget that there can be great films with both of these things
and a clever plot (e.g. the first Matrix). And this brings me to the most important thing - the way I learned I should structure a project.
A PROJECT STRUCTURE1. IDEA
The idea must come first. Bring something very deep, personal, philosophical, funny, emotive or romantic - it doesn't really matter what it is as long as it's not forced! Tell a story that comes from within you, about something that's been bugging you for so long that it just has to come out, on a paper, into a script, into a movie...to the audience for them to learn about it and possibly from it.
2. THE STORY STRUCTURE
What can I say, the good old Aristotle's dramatic structure is a time-proven key for most stories.
But there's more. You can not make a story full of great moments - if every scene was awesome and bombastic, they would all feel average. You need to build a story that's gripping but balanced. When you go up, you need to go down a few scenes later, when you bring action, you need to bring dialog (or slow down in any other form) also. This way the special parts of the story will feel even more so.
And always remember - even if your film generally sucks, if you have a strong intro (to get the people's attention) and more importantly outro (to give them nice feeling when the credits are rolling) you're almost always halfway there. But dare not to count on it!
3.CHARACTERS
You need to inhabit your story with interesting 3-dimensional characters. What does 3-dimensional mean? Grey. They are not white nor black. Not good nor evil. They are better and worse and they all have their virtues and flaws. This way they become human beings - because human beings are flawed creations.
And of course never underestimate the power of romance or relationship. A beautiful lover, a dear pet, an old parent - it is always painful to loose them and if I manage to make the reader/viewer worry about the characters, it's immediately a huge success. For as soon as my audience worries about them, suddenly everything that happens is pushed to a whole new level. The audience must live with the story!
4.LOOK & ATMOSPHERE
Yes, that's right. The look and the atmosphere achieved through camera style, image quality, filters, vfx etc. come fourth. I'd say the ratio is 60:40 (idea, structure,characters:looks,atmosphere), but many writers or storytellers would say it's even more in favor of the former. Make no mistake, the way your film looks influences how your film feels in a lot of ways, But if the first three points are not built well enough, the feel will never be powerful enough to grip.
Of course there's a lot more to it than these 4 points. I didn't mention MUSIC which plays a huge role in the overall filmmaking process - even though it's often underestimated. I wouldn't say that the music is almost as important as the video. It
is as important as the video. Of course there are directors who can create a film, not incorporate any music at all and create a very powerful and emotional experience. Hats down to all of them (e.g. watch Generation Kill TV series - no music and you don't even notice it). On the other hand think about examples like Dark Knight-Hans Zimmer or Battlestar Galactica-Bear McReary...I can't imagine how much less powerful the experience would be without the wonderful music.
Anyway, this is a few ideas I realized when finishing the Shadows of the Past project. I delved too much into the look & atmosphere part of the project and I completely forgot to stress the first three. I think I can still be forgiven for the whole film was never meant to be more than an action video and a visual effects showreel but I'm very glad I realized all this. I don't say it's
the way, I say it's
my way I want to do my future films and all I ask from you is to think about it.
Remember - nowadays, every sh*tty film has wonderful visual effects and people are getting fed up. It's a one way street and eventually no one will be stunned by anything that appears on the screen. Hopefully people will be more and more thrilled by what appears
under it. So what's my advice? Build the ideas and the stories first - the looks second. If you want to make flashy videos, go for commercials or game cinematics. Filmmaking is a whole different league.
If you haven't got the story, you haven't got anything.
- Raoul Walsh
P.S. Huge thanks goes to Dorkmann Scott and his "
Grey Area" blog post that inspired me and Verica Kordic who made me realize a lot of this.
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